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hello and welcome to English Learning

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in part one we learned how to write a

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good topic sentence

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in part two we learned how to write

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supporting and concluding sentences

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in this video we are going to learn how

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to organize the ideas presented in a

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paragraph

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methods of organizing writing

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as a writer you need to use some tools

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to organize the ideas presented in a

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paragraph

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organizing ideas makes it easier for

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readers to follow and comprehend your

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writing

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in this video we are going to learn

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three common ways to organize ideas

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presented in a paragraph

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chronological order

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of importance

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and spatial order

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chronological order

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this technique is most useful when you

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want to write about a series of events

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that happen in order

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for instance in cooking you follow an

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order to prepare a dish

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starting with shopping for ingredients

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such as vegetables oil

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Etc first followed by preparing and

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mixing the ingredients finally leading

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to serving a delicious dish

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similar to cooking which requires a

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clear order in writing a paragraph about

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a series of events we need to consider

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order and clarity

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time order words also called time order

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transitions such as first later then

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after that next finally and Etc help the

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writers to organize their ideas in a

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paragraph chronologically

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in terms of punctuation we put a comma

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after time order words except then

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after then we don't use a comma

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chronological order words are used

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to describe the history of an event

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to narrate an experience or a story

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to explain how to do or make something

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to explain the steps in a process

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it is worth mentioning that

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chronological order is mostly used in

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expository writing

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in expository writing the writers

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narrate describe inform or explain a

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process

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for instance in the following paragraph

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we order the routines of Emma on Sunday

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evenings with time order words

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Emma has a particular routine on Sunday

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evenings

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first she washes the dishes after lunch

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later she sweeps off the kitchen and her

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room

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then she clears the dust from the

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surface of TV cupboards and furniture

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after that she cleans the yard and water

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the plants

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next she irons her clothes and take a

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bath

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finally she goes out with her friends

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and stays out late

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in the following example the history of

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aircraft development is briefly

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described based on time order

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by the 17th century the theory behind

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balloon flight had started to develop

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however it wasn't until the mid-18th

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century that the montgolfier brothers

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developed larger models of the balloon

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this led to the first manned hot air

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balloon flight lighter than air on

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November 21st 1783

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not long after this in 1799 Sir George

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Kelly of England developed the concept

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of fixed-wing aircraft

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using these principles Kaylee

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successfully made the first model

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airplane and because of this he is often

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considered the father of Aviation

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practice

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choose a favorite topic such as cooking

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dancing studying or making a video then

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use the transitions to describe the

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process of cooking spaghetti for example

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from the beginning to the end

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order of importance

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order of importance is used for

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persuading and convincing and ranking

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items by their importance or advantage

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based on the kind of writing you can

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move from the least to the most

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important point however you can begin

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with the most important point and move

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towards less important ones

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for instance when you are writing a

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persuasive essay it is better to start

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with the most significant point to

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immediately catch your reader's

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attention and encourage them to continue

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reading

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organizing the writing from the most to

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least important strategy is more

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effective in written examinations

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business communication and when you want

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to establish a serious impact

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now focus on the following paragraph

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which is organized based on the order of

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importance

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the company has a straightforward

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management system

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the president who manages the overall

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operation takes all major decisions but

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the board takes daily decisions

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beneath the board members are the

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regional managers who monitor the branch

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managers

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most importantly almost as importantly

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just as importantly and finally are some

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key transitional words that you can use

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with this method of organization

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write a paragraph that discusses your

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passion

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your passion could be music a particular

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sport filmmaking and so on

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your paragraph should be built upon the

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reasons why you feel so strongly

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briefly discuss your reasons in the

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order from the most to the least

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spatial order

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we use spatial order to organize our

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paragraph based on the following

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purposes

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helping readers visualize something

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creating a scene using the census smell

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sound taste touch and sight

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writing a descriptive essay

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when you describe the objects around you

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for example in a bedroom this is called

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spatial order

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in fact you create a picture for your

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reader

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in this method first you choose a

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starting point and then guide the reader

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to follow you as the writing develops

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consider the following paragraph in

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which a bedroom is described

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attached to my bedroom wall is a small

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wooden rack dangling with red and

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turquoise necklaces that Shimmer as you

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just to the right of the rack is my

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window framed by billowy white curtains

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the piece of such an image is a stark

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contrast to my desk which sits to the

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right of the window layered with

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textbooks crumpled papers coffee cups

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and an overflowing ashtray

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turning my head to the right I see a set

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of two bare windows that frame the trees

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outside the glass like a 3D painting

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below the windows is an oak chest from

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which blankets and scarves are

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protruding

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curtains is an antique dresser on top of

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which sits a jewelry box and a few

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picture frames

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a tall mirror attached to the dresser

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takes up most of the wall which is color

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of lavender

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you can use the following transitional

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words when using spatial order

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just to the left or just to the right

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behind between on the left or the right

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away turning left or turning right

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practice

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write a paragraph using spatial order

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that describes your commute to work

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school or another location you visit

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so in this video we learned how to

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organize ideas in a paragraph by using

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time order order of importance and

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spatial order

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chronological order is most commonly

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used in expository writing

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it is useful for explaining the history

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of your subject for telling a story or

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for explaining a process

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order of importance is most appropriate

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in a persuasion paper as well as for

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essays in which you rank things people

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or events by their significance

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spatial order describes things as they

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are arranged in space and is best for

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helping readers visualize something as

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you want them to see it

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that's it for today's video

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if you haven't watched the previous

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parts of the paragraph writing series

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yet the links are in the description

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