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Hi everyone

I'm Judy and I want talking about my whole day

Today I woke up at 10 o'clock and eaten some bread,cheese and cucumber 

That'  very delicious and I enjoy it

Then I started to learn ENG When before the lunch

After lunch I studied more ENG  

It's my day

I just studied and studied ENG today.

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خط ۵ بجایeatenبگیدate

خط بعدیش میشود

That was very delicious and I enjoyed it. 

یکی دو خط بعدتر نیاز به کلمهwhen در آنجا نیس

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Hi everyone

I'm Judy and I want  to talk about my whole day

Today I woke up at 10 o'clock and  i ate some bread,cheese and cucumber 

That was very delicious and i enjoyed it

Then I started to study ENG before the lunch

After lunch I studied more ENG  

That was my dayI just studied English the whole day.

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