WEBVTT FILE 1 00:00:00.560 --> 00:00:03.760 hi i'm rebecca from invit in this lesson 2 00:00:03.760 --> 00:00:05.920 i'll show you how to correct a very 3 00:00:05.920 --> 00:00:08.080 simple error that's often made by 4 00:00:08.080 --> 00:00:10.080 english learners especially at a 5 00:00:10.080 --> 00:00:12.559 beginner or intermediate level 6 00:00:12.559 --> 00:00:14.799 and this mistake is called using a 7 00:00:14.799 --> 00:00:17.520 duplicate subject what does that mean it 8 00:00:17.520 --> 00:00:20.400 means using the subject more than once 9 00:00:20.400 --> 00:00:22.320 all right so i'm going to show you 10 00:00:22.320 --> 00:00:23.920 exactly how 11 00:00:23.920 --> 00:00:26.079 what it sounds like and how to correct 12 00:00:26.079 --> 00:00:28.320 it okay here we go 13 00:00:28.320 --> 00:00:31.439 so let's look at these three sentences 14 00:00:31.439 --> 00:00:33.920 my brother is a doctor 15 00:00:33.920 --> 00:00:36.079 now in this sentence which is the 16 00:00:36.079 --> 00:00:37.200 subject 17 00:00:37.200 --> 00:00:39.440 it's 18 00:00:39.760 --> 00:00:41.520 my brother right 19 00:00:41.520 --> 00:00:42.879 what's the verb 20 00:00:42.879 --> 00:00:44.719 is that's fine 21 00:00:44.719 --> 00:00:48.399 but there's one subject and one verb 22 00:00:48.399 --> 00:00:50.879 now instead of saying my brother i could 23 00:00:50.879 --> 00:00:52.879 use a pronoun right 24 00:00:52.879 --> 00:00:55.840 so then i could say he 25 00:00:55.840 --> 00:00:56.960 is 26 00:00:56.960 --> 00:01:00.480 a doctor all right again one subject one 27 00:01:00.480 --> 00:01:02.000 verb 28 00:01:02.000 --> 00:01:04.479 but let's look at this one so this was 29 00:01:04.479 --> 00:01:06.400 right this was right but let's look what 30 00:01:06.400 --> 00:01:08.159 happened here 31 00:01:08.159 --> 00:01:10.880 here it says my brother 32 00:01:10.880 --> 00:01:12.880 he is a doctor 33 00:01:12.880 --> 00:01:15.920 so what's wrong there well what happened 34 00:01:15.920 --> 00:01:17.840 is that you had brother which was the 35 00:01:17.840 --> 00:01:18.880 subject 36 00:01:18.880 --> 00:01:21.840 and you also have here he 37 00:01:21.840 --> 00:01:24.959 and that's called a duplicate subject 38 00:01:24.959 --> 00:01:27.920 using this subject more than once which 39 00:01:27.920 --> 00:01:29.200 in english 40 00:01:29.200 --> 00:01:32.078 is wrong okay it's possible in different 41 00:01:32.078 --> 00:01:33.840 languages that it's okay to speak like 42 00:01:33.840 --> 00:01:36.560 that but in english it's correct 43 00:01:36.560 --> 00:01:38.880 not to do that okay it's wrong to do 44 00:01:38.880 --> 00:01:41.920 that it's incorrect to do it so here you 45 00:01:41.920 --> 00:01:44.078 would either need to say go back to 46 00:01:44.078 --> 00:01:46.720 saying my brother is a doctor or you can 47 00:01:46.720 --> 00:01:49.840 say he is a doctor but not both all 48 00:01:49.840 --> 00:01:52.399 right that's the important thing 49 00:01:52.399 --> 00:01:53.280 okay 50 00:01:53.280 --> 00:01:55.600 now here we had one subject but it 51 00:01:55.600 --> 00:01:57.520 doesn't matter sometimes in an english 52 00:01:57.520 --> 00:01:59.680 sentence we have more than one subject 53 00:01:59.680 --> 00:02:00.960 and that's okay 54 00:02:00.960 --> 00:02:03.439 as long as we don't repeat them in the 55 00:02:03.439 --> 00:02:05.840 pronouns let's look at an example of 56 00:02:05.840 --> 00:02:06.799 that 57 00:02:06.799 --> 00:02:09.919 so here we have sarah and john 58 00:02:09.919 --> 00:02:13.680 are writers okay so what's the subject 59 00:02:13.680 --> 00:02:14.800 here 60 00:02:14.800 --> 00:02:17.200 so it's this whole thing sarah john 61 00:02:17.200 --> 00:02:18.000 right 62 00:02:18.000 --> 00:02:21.120 and then we have r which is the verb so 63 00:02:21.120 --> 00:02:22.720 here we have a compound subject 64 00:02:22.720 --> 00:02:25.840 connected by and that's that's fine 65 00:02:25.840 --> 00:02:27.280 that's not repeating anything because 66 00:02:27.280 --> 00:02:29.280 these are two different people we talked 67 00:02:29.280 --> 00:02:31.919 about them once 68 00:02:31.919 --> 00:02:34.560 or we could say so this one's okay 69 00:02:34.560 --> 00:02:36.239 instead of saying sarah and john we 70 00:02:36.239 --> 00:02:37.840 could call them 71 00:02:37.840 --> 00:02:38.720 they 72 00:02:38.720 --> 00:02:39.599 right 73 00:02:39.599 --> 00:02:41.919 one subject 74 00:02:41.919 --> 00:02:45.120 are one verb that's fine and that's also 75 00:02:45.120 --> 00:02:46.720 correct 76 00:02:46.720 --> 00:02:48.639 but let's look at this one 77 00:02:48.639 --> 00:02:50.400 sarah and john 78 00:02:50.400 --> 00:02:52.319 they are writers 79 00:02:52.319 --> 00:02:55.519 is that correct no that's wrong 80 00:02:55.519 --> 00:02:58.000 because we had sarah and john but then 81 00:02:58.000 --> 00:02:59.680 we repeated it 82 00:02:59.680 --> 00:03:01.360 by saying they 83 00:03:01.360 --> 00:03:04.720 right that's not correct 84 00:03:04.720 --> 00:03:07.680 okay so we would have to take that out 85 00:03:07.680 --> 00:03:09.760 we could say sarah and john are writers 86 00:03:09.760 --> 00:03:11.440 or we could take out sarah and john and 87 00:03:11.440 --> 00:03:13.440 just say they are writers like we did up 88 00:03:13.440 --> 00:03:16.800 here but you cannot do both all right 89 00:03:16.800 --> 00:03:18.720 and that's what tends to happen 90 00:03:18.720 --> 00:03:20.959 sometimes when people are just starting 91 00:03:20.959 --> 00:03:23.040 okay they tend to use both not sure 92 00:03:23.040 --> 00:03:25.440 exactly why it happens as i said maybe 93 00:03:25.440 --> 00:03:27.680 it's possible in other languages but in 94 00:03:27.680 --> 00:03:30.080 english it's not it would be wrong 95 00:03:30.080 --> 00:03:31.840 let's look at another example okay now 96 00:03:31.840 --> 00:03:33.760 that you i think understand what's going 97 00:03:33.760 --> 00:03:36.480 on you will see it before i do 98 00:03:36.480 --> 00:03:39.040 so here we could say tom never eats 99 00:03:39.040 --> 00:03:43.200 dessert tom is the subject that's fine 100 00:03:43.200 --> 00:03:45.519 here instead of saying tom we use the 101 00:03:45.519 --> 00:03:47.840 pronoun he 102 00:03:47.840 --> 00:03:51.200 so he never eats dessert that's fine too 103 00:03:51.200 --> 00:03:53.519 only one subject 104 00:03:53.519 --> 00:03:55.920 and here we said tom he never eats 105 00:03:55.920 --> 00:03:57.120 dessert 106 00:03:57.120 --> 00:03:58.480 is that right 107 00:03:58.480 --> 00:04:01.200 no by now you know that's wrong why 108 00:04:01.200 --> 00:04:03.120 because we had tom and we had he and we 109 00:04:03.120 --> 00:04:05.840 can't do that because tom and he are the 110 00:04:05.840 --> 00:04:09.040 same subject the same person 111 00:04:09.040 --> 00:04:11.120 so what you have to remember is this 112 00:04:11.120 --> 00:04:14.400 rule that if you use a pronoun you use 113 00:04:14.400 --> 00:04:15.920 the pronoun 114 00:04:15.920 --> 00:04:18.238 to replace the subject 115 00:04:18.238 --> 00:04:22.079 not in addition to it okay so you either 116 00:04:22.079 --> 00:04:24.160 use the subject the main subject let's 117 00:04:24.160 --> 00:04:25.919 say a name or something 118 00:04:25.919 --> 00:04:27.040 tom 119 00:04:27.040 --> 00:04:29.520 or use the pronoun he 120 00:04:29.520 --> 00:04:32.479 but you don't say tom and he in the same 121 00:04:32.479 --> 00:04:34.800 sentence okay because that would be 122 00:04:34.800 --> 00:04:37.279 duplicate subject and we can't do that 123 00:04:37.279 --> 00:04:39.600 in english now this is really important 124 00:04:39.600 --> 00:04:42.639 of course when you're speaking but also 125 00:04:42.639 --> 00:04:44.720 in any exam that you're doing any kind 126 00:04:44.720 --> 00:04:47.759 of writing any academic writing any exam 127 00:04:47.759 --> 00:04:49.839 writing any business writing you don't 128 00:04:49.839 --> 00:04:51.279 want to make this mistake because it's a 129 00:04:51.279 --> 00:04:53.520 very basic mistake and it doesn't make 130 00:04:53.520 --> 00:04:55.759 you look good okay but it's very easy to 131 00:04:55.759 --> 00:04:57.839 clean up let's do a little practice now 132 00:04:57.839 --> 00:05:00.560 so you can do just that all right so now 133 00:05:00.560 --> 00:05:01.839 we're gonna go through these eight 134 00:05:01.839 --> 00:05:02.960 sentences 135 00:05:02.960 --> 00:05:05.919 one by one and you tell me whether it's 136 00:05:05.919 --> 00:05:08.800 right or it's wrong okay try to think in 137 00:05:08.800 --> 00:05:11.600 terms of is there one subject or are we 138 00:05:11.600 --> 00:05:14.160 repeating the subject unnecessarily okay 139 00:05:14.160 --> 00:05:16.000 that's what you're looking for and again 140 00:05:16.000 --> 00:05:18.720 remember some are correct some are not 141 00:05:18.720 --> 00:05:20.720 so number one 142 00:05:20.720 --> 00:05:24.400 the car it was going too fast 143 00:05:24.400 --> 00:05:26.160 now you should be able to tell me right 144 00:05:26.160 --> 00:05:28.080 away okay 145 00:05:28.080 --> 00:05:29.600 if it's right or wrong 146 00:05:29.600 --> 00:05:30.560 so 147 00:05:30.560 --> 00:05:31.759 this is 148 00:05:31.759 --> 00:05:34.720 wrong okay 149 00:05:34.880 --> 00:05:37.120 now if you can't tell me right away then 150 00:05:37.120 --> 00:05:39.600 pause the video okay think about it and 151 00:05:39.600 --> 00:05:41.279 then put it back on and then i'll give 152 00:05:41.279 --> 00:05:42.880 you the answer okay 153 00:05:42.880 --> 00:05:45.199 so why is this wrong because what's the 154 00:05:45.199 --> 00:05:47.759 subject here the car 155 00:05:47.759 --> 00:05:51.759 and then what happened we put in 156 00:05:51.759 --> 00:05:55.360 it okay so we repeated the pronoun uh 157 00:05:55.360 --> 00:05:57.839 sorry we included a pronoun 158 00:05:57.839 --> 00:06:00.800 and we also have the actual subject so 159 00:06:00.800 --> 00:06:02.560 we have a double subject which you do 160 00:06:02.560 --> 00:06:06.240 not need okay number two they went to 161 00:06:06.240 --> 00:06:07.919 bed early 162 00:06:07.919 --> 00:06:11.039 is that right or wrong tell me quickly 163 00:06:11.039 --> 00:06:12.319 it's 164 00:06:12.319 --> 00:06:13.520 right 165 00:06:13.520 --> 00:06:16.880 okay good what's the subject they 166 00:06:16.880 --> 00:06:19.680 okay happens to be a pronoun that's okay 167 00:06:19.680 --> 00:06:21.680 your subject can be a regular noun a 168 00:06:21.680 --> 00:06:22.880 pronoun 169 00:06:22.880 --> 00:06:23.759 okay 170 00:06:23.759 --> 00:06:27.120 but just one all right not repeated 171 00:06:27.120 --> 00:06:32.000 number three steve he is so talented 172 00:06:32.000 --> 00:06:34.400 right or wrong 173 00:06:34.400 --> 00:06:36.560 that one is 174 00:06:36.560 --> 00:06:38.080 wrong why 175 00:06:38.080 --> 00:06:41.360 subject steve and another one repeated 176 00:06:41.360 --> 00:06:42.319 he 177 00:06:42.319 --> 00:06:44.639 wrong okay so let's take that out and 178 00:06:44.639 --> 00:06:47.520 make it correct steve is so talented up 179 00:06:47.520 --> 00:06:50.639 here the car was going too fast okay one 180 00:06:50.639 --> 00:06:53.520 subject nice and clean no repetition of 181 00:06:53.520 --> 00:06:54.880 the subject 182 00:06:54.880 --> 00:06:56.080 number four 183 00:06:56.080 --> 00:06:59.599 mr brown teaches very well 184 00:06:59.599 --> 00:07:04.160 is that right or wrong that one is 185 00:07:04.160 --> 00:07:07.440 right okay again what's the subject mr 186 00:07:07.440 --> 00:07:10.560 bro and we didn't repeat it okay so it's 187 00:07:10.560 --> 00:07:12.160 perfectly fine 188 00:07:12.160 --> 00:07:13.520 number five 189 00:07:13.520 --> 00:07:16.960 your package arrived today 190 00:07:16.960 --> 00:07:18.960 right or wrong 191 00:07:18.960 --> 00:07:21.840 okay that one is also correct 192 00:07:21.840 --> 00:07:24.960 the subject is package your package and 193 00:07:24.960 --> 00:07:27.120 then we go to the verb no repetition 194 00:07:27.120 --> 00:07:29.120 nice and clean okay 195 00:07:29.120 --> 00:07:30.400 you're getting it 196 00:07:30.400 --> 00:07:31.280 good 197 00:07:31.280 --> 00:07:32.400 number six 198 00:07:32.400 --> 00:07:35.680 rick and susan they will call me 199 00:07:35.680 --> 00:07:37.280 is that right or wrong 200 00:07:37.280 --> 00:07:38.479 okay 201 00:07:38.479 --> 00:07:40.319 that one is 202 00:07:40.319 --> 00:07:43.120 wrong why we have a compound subject 203 00:07:43.120 --> 00:07:44.479 rick and susan 204 00:07:44.479 --> 00:07:46.879 and we don't need to add the pronoun 205 00:07:46.879 --> 00:07:49.280 here okay so we take that out rick and 206 00:07:49.280 --> 00:07:51.680 susan will call me or if you know who 207 00:07:51.680 --> 00:07:53.520 you're talking about you could just say 208 00:07:53.520 --> 00:07:57.039 they will call me but not both all right 209 00:07:57.039 --> 00:07:58.960 good number seven 210 00:07:58.960 --> 00:08:00.879 the suitcase 211 00:08:00.879 --> 00:08:02.639 which it is brown 212 00:08:02.639 --> 00:08:04.560 is mine 213 00:08:04.560 --> 00:08:07.039 this one is a little bit different but i 214 00:08:07.039 --> 00:08:09.120 think you can still tell if it's right 215 00:08:09.120 --> 00:08:10.240 or wrong 216 00:08:10.240 --> 00:08:13.520 okay the suitcase which it is brown is 217 00:08:13.520 --> 00:08:14.400 mine 218 00:08:14.400 --> 00:08:16.319 that is wrong 219 00:08:16.319 --> 00:08:17.199 why 220 00:08:17.199 --> 00:08:19.280 because what's the subject here okay the 221 00:08:19.280 --> 00:08:21.599 suitcase all right 222 00:08:21.599 --> 00:08:24.240 and then we have here which it is brown 223 00:08:24.240 --> 00:08:25.199 no 224 00:08:25.199 --> 00:08:28.639 so we would just say the suitcase comma 225 00:08:28.639 --> 00:08:31.840 which is brown comma is mine 226 00:08:31.840 --> 00:08:32.880 okay 227 00:08:32.880 --> 00:08:35.120 here we have the verb 228 00:08:35.120 --> 00:08:36.320 all right 229 00:08:36.320 --> 00:08:39.360 and the last one dr greenberg isn't here 230 00:08:39.360 --> 00:08:41.440 today 231 00:08:41.440 --> 00:08:43.039 is that right or wrong 232 00:08:43.039 --> 00:08:44.640 that one is 233 00:08:44.640 --> 00:08:47.120 correct okay it doesn't matter if it's a 234 00:08:47.120 --> 00:08:49.200 positive subject or a negative subject 235 00:08:49.200 --> 00:08:51.519 that doesn't matter we're talking about 236 00:08:51.519 --> 00:08:53.120 whether we're repeating the subject and 237 00:08:53.120 --> 00:08:55.279 in this case no the subject was dr 238 00:08:55.279 --> 00:08:57.519 greenberg and we didn't repeat it so 239 00:08:57.519 --> 00:08:59.839 it's perfectly fine okay so pay 240 00:08:59.839 --> 00:09:02.080 attention to when you're speaking when 241 00:09:02.080 --> 00:09:05.200 others are speaking and listen for this 242 00:09:05.200 --> 00:09:07.519 mistake and if you make it in your 243 00:09:07.519 --> 00:09:09.360 writing or while you're speaking stop 244 00:09:09.360 --> 00:09:11.600 yourself correct yourself and say 245 00:09:11.600 --> 00:09:13.920 i don't need to work extra hard i don't 246 00:09:13.920 --> 00:09:17.600 need to add another subject so just have 247 00:09:17.600 --> 00:09:20.800 one subject either the subject itself or 248 00:09:20.800 --> 00:09:24.160 a pronoun but not both all right and if 249 00:09:24.160 --> 00:09:26.000 you want to really master this then of 250 00:09:26.000 --> 00:09:30.880 course do our quiz at www.invid.com 251 00:09:30.880 --> 00:09:32.559 and you can also check out lots and lots 252 00:09:32.559 --> 00:09:34.640 of other lessons there and if you want 253 00:09:34.640 --> 00:09:37.440 to keep correcting these kind of small 254 00:09:37.440 --> 00:09:39.360 mistakes that make a big difference in 255 00:09:39.360 --> 00:09:41.200 your english then 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